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Jim: Mike Nolan
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Sky: (for the net to find out, not sure)
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Annie: Nara Olson
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Newshost: (Not sure)
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Pastor: Ryan Quigley
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Steve: (Not sure)
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God: (Nate probably)
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Bill Wolfenheimer: (Not sure)
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The Cop: (Not sure)
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Mindy: (Not sure)
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Rand: (Not sure)
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Any cast/character ideas?
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Help me improve this in a Godly way while still being a time loop style film (and also still have Bill Wolfenheimer)
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How should I improve this site: https://billwolfenheimer.com/
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We are working on the screenplay
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Can I record our brainstorm?
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What do we do now?
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What do we do now?
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STEVE
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STEVE
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First Before I explain what is going on, please stay here until at least zero six hundered hours.
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Lets just hang out until zero six hundred hours in here, we got Mario Kart.
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SKY
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Why zero six hundred hours?
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STEVE
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You won't believe me, but stay anyways, at twenty hundred hours the world will be destroyed and You two, I and two other people will be sent back to our respective places where we were at zero six hundred hours (and yes even if you try dying you will be looped back, to the other people in the loop you will be dead until the loop resets)
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JIM
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Who's resetting it?
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STEVE
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God.
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JIM
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Theres no God.
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SKY
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Yeah there is no God.
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STEVE
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Well lets just hang out until zero six hundred hours in here, we got Mario Kart.
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STEVE
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(loads mario kart into the wii and hands out controllers)
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(loads mario kart into the wii and hands out controllers)
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STEVE
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Yes.
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Yes.
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EXT. WALKING TO SKYS HOUSE - DAY
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EXT. WALKING TO SKYS HOUSE - DAY
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SKY
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SKY
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Its a nice day today.
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Its a nice day today.
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Cool I Just wanted to vlog with my new friend and I can't use my camera because my mom took it away when she took away my computer yesterday for not cleaning my room.
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Cool I Just wanted to vlog with my new friend and I can't use my camera because my mom took it away when she took away my computer yesterday for not cleaning my room.
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SKY
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SKY
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Oh that's messed up.
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RAND
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Hi Sky are you going to visit me latter today for that cookout.
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INT. SKYS ROOM - DAY
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SKY
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Well we're here at my house.
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JIM
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Cool you have a GoPro Hero 3.
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SKY
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Yep and other than my phone that's my only camera.
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JIM
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Woah you have a laptop with Linux on it, Sky I really like you (you are against the spying of Windows).
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SKY
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I really like you too Jim and yes that is really messed up of Microsoft.
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JIM
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I still use dotnet on linux.
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Sky turns on the TV
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SKY (On The TV)
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We are Centile Corporation and we do data recovery and fix your ovaries call us today at +1 800 555 3650 (Not responsable for ovarian cancer)
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JIM
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Wait you had a Centile Corporation commercial (that's one of Bill Wolfenheimers companies)?
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SKY
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Yes I had a commercial with Centile Corporation and No I didn't know Bill Wolfenheimer had his hand in it.
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SKY
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OK the camera is on so what do you want to record?
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JIM
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A Joke?
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SKY
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What does IDK mean?
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JIM
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I Don't Know.
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SKY
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Ok I will some one else then.
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SKY
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Well we are having fun aren't we?
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Yes we are.
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SKY
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Look out!
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SKY
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Wait why are we here?
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Wow that was weird Jim.
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Hi Sky are you going to visit me latter today for that cookout?
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SKY
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Whats on TV Today?
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Probably something different.
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SKY (On The TV)
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We are Centile Corporation and we do data recovery and fix your ovaries call us today at +1 800 555 3650 (Not responsable for ovarian cancer)
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SKY
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What's happening, first off Rand asked me for whether I will go to his cookout, He said that yesterday and now he said it today even though he said that he never asked it yesterday and second the same commercial came on both yesterday and today at the same time?
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STEVE
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What?
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Like groundhog day and yes I know why it is happening.
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STEVE
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Yes, the world will end due to the evil tech guy Bill Wolfenheimer causing destruction with baby robots and God is looping Me, You, Jim, and The Pastor.
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SKY
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Do either of you have $42 dollars? I will sell you a special flash drive that will allow you to store files across loops.
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You know what, hince we don't have $42 dollars lets steal some from the cash register.
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Everybody put your hands up!
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No I'm sorry please don't let me go to jail!
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I am scaning you for contraband such as meth, pinephones or Nintendo Wii's (yes some bloke snuck one of those in here).
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