Last edited August 22, 2024 1:47:02 PM

Ideas.txt

@@ -0,0 +1,23 @@
+Nov 23, 2023: We do data recovery and fix your ovaries (parody of pet cremation from imprac) sky's part
+
+Jan 6, 2024: Sky: Jim you need to pull your head out of your bum and pray to the lord
+
+Jan 6, 2024: The ending of the movie has a 4th wall break that starts with a wii homebrew application crashing (probably not)
+
+Jan 30, 2024: bill wolfenheimer's company is the "Emesis corporation"
+
+Apr 24, 2024 (false teachers probably) open your bibles to Fallopian 4:20
+
+Apr 24, 2024: All screens are removed from devices (a joke in a scene, that also shows that I can't keep a screen ok for a month)
+
+May 18, 2024: Sky and I settle the chicken or egg debate, and a guy calls the Bible a fairy tale.
+
+Jun 6, 2024: The movie starts with an animated scene stating original sin and the cross
+
+Jan 7, 2024: (Use camera CinePi, but maybe not due to low budget but maybe)
+
+Jun 16, 2024 (not sure): grace for violation of ten commandments
+
+Jun 18, 2024: a 2 clone scene where you shoot the clone, but they are both clones and they are the clone of the one shooting
+
+June or Jul ?, 2024: amniotic fluid joke and roll up your windows there's an exhaust leak.

README.md

@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 Holy Loop
 =========
 
+> :warning: **SPOILER ALERT** if you hate spoilers leave now (since this is the screenplay).
+
 This is the screenplay for my upcoming movie.
 
 The artifacts can be found [here](https://downloads.tesses.net/artifacts/tesses50/holyloop/)

holyloop.fountain

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Draft Date: 10/27/2023
 Notes: 
     INITIAL DRAFT
 
-Copyright: (c) 2024 Tesses Studios (CC-BY-SA v4.0)
+Copyright: (c) 2024 Tesses Studios (CC-BY-SA v4.0, the license is available here: https://s.tesses.net/s/bzm9zGWqpAk)
 
 This is a story about athiests who find God, but are stuck in a time loop until they defeat the evil Bill Wolfenheimer
 
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ PASTOR
 One more thing, whos going in that loop.
 
 GOD
-The two atheists named Jim and Sky, Me, You, Steve, The Cop that pulls you over for a ticket because you sometimes speed.
+The two atheists named Jim and Sky, Me, You, Steve, the angels (including the demons) and the cop that pulls you over for a ticket because you sometimes speed.
 
 PASTOR
 What, you said Me, Steve and the cop, why are we involved?
@@ -342,13 +342,10 @@ SKY
 Yep and other than my phone that's my only camera.
 
 JIM
-Woah you have a laptop with Linux on it, Sky I really like you (you are against the spying of Windows).
+It looks like you have a TV so lets see what is on.
 
-SKY
+SKY 
-I really like you too Jim and yes that is really messed up of Microsoft.
+Ok
-
-JIM
-I still use dotnet on linux.
 
 Sky turns on the TV
 
@@ -440,6 +437,14 @@ Sky turns off TV
 SKY
 Now that's weird, the same commercial.
 
+EXT. WALKING TO STEVES GARAGE - DAY
+
+SKY
+That was weird today, so we need to go to Steves house to see if he knows what is going on
+
+JIM
+Ok
+
 INT. STEVES GARAGE - DAY
 
 SKY
@@ -458,7 +463,7 @@ SKY
 Can you tell me why?
 
 STEVE
-Yes, the world will end due to the evil tech guy Bill Wolfenheimer causing destruction with baby robots and God is looping Me, You, Jim, and The Pastor.
+Yes, the world will end due to the evil tech guy Bill Wolfenheimer causing destruction with baby robots and God is looping Me, You, Jim, Himself, The Pastor, The Cop and the angels (including the demons).
 
 SKY
 Okay thats weird.
@@ -521,7 +526,7 @@ Sky and Jim both comply.
 
 The cop arrests them both and puts them in the car.
 
-INT. In Cop Car - DAY
+INT. IN COP CAR - DAY
 
 COP
 Why did you have to do that?
@@ -602,3 +607,53 @@ Fine.
 SKY ^
 Fine.
 
+INT. DETENTION CENTRE - DAY
+
+SKY
+Thats weird he just skipped the finger prints and stuff like that.
+
+JIM
+I agree that is a little weird.
+
+SKY
+Another weird thing is, he just sent us to our main cell.
+
+JIM
+When I went to jail before, they took my mugshot, finger prints and had me in a entry cell.
+
+SKY
+Wait you have been in jail before, how come?
+
+JIM
+I got angry and I hit a family member with a controller.
+
+SKY
+Just like that?
+
+JIM
+They came a couple of other times when I freaked out, I hit a cop the first time they had to come (at least after I came home from when I got put in a group home for my mom asking for services for me, they falsely accused me of watching porn and also I could not listen to music freely at 2 of the group homes because I couldn't have a mp3 player because I listened to explicit music or maybe just because it was my main coping skill according to one of my schools).
+
+SKY
+Wow the group home part is sick on their part.
+
+JIM
+Yeah, story of my life or at least a few years of it.
+
+SKY
+Can you explain the worst group home?
+
+JIM
+Yeah I can try, I will be talking about the second one (I got taken away twice before these four group homes and I am talking about the second one within the four).
+
+Jim waits for 2 seconds
+
+JIM
+First of all it was out in the country (I do like the country though), we had to take care of the animals which I am not a fan of
+I wasn't allowed to have my mp3 player or computer (I couldn't use the computer at the third group home either, the fourth I didn't have internet but I was able to eventually use a single board computer, I had mp3 players at the first and fourth group homes)
+there were problems with this group home as well, they didn't let me visit my family for more than a month or even a phone call for a week and blamed my family for not calling in the first four days, they forced us to do chores with animals that they didn't even take care of, the horses hooves had never been trimmed and thanks to one of my family members the group home got shut down.
+
+SKY
+Woah really?
+
+JIM
+Yes really, I need to break the fourth wall, this really happened to me (all of this that I have talked about while in this cell).